add tabs to ssh how to, fix md, typos #46

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{{< tabpane text=true >}}
{{% tab "deSEC" %}}
### If you chose deSEC: How to get a token

If you have chosen deSEC

If you have chosen Cloudflare

If you have chosen deSEC If you have chosen Cloudflare
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{{< tabpane text=true >}}
{{% tab "Unix-like systems (PC)" %}}
### If you are Unix-like system user

If you are a Unix-like system user

OR

Unix-like

If you are ***a*** Unix-like system user OR Unix-like
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{{% /tab %}}
{{% tab "Windows" %}}
### If you are Windows user

If you are a Windows user

OR

If you are using Windows

OR

For Windows users

OR

Windows

If you are ***a*** Windows user OR If you are using Windows OR For Windows users OR Windows
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{{% /tab %}}
{{% tab "Android (Termux)" %}}
### If you are Android (Termux) user

same as above, you forgot the article.

same as above, you forgot the article.
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{{< /imgproc >}}
{{< imgproc thunderbird Fill "1000x950" />}}
## What we use as an email server?

There is no predicate (сказуемое) in this sentence.

There is no predicate (сказуемое) in this sentence.
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On the deployed server, the following components are responsible for sending, receiving, filtering emails:
- Postfix - SMTP server;

You should use proper dashes, as English rules prescribe.

https://www.grammarly.com/blog/dash/

It is only relates to the symbol between words. In the start of the line, the minus sign must be kept because markdown.

You should use proper dashes, as English rules prescribe. https://www.grammarly.com/blog/dash/ It is only relates to the symbol between words. In the start of the line, the minus sign must be kept because markdown.
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{{% /tab %}}
{{% tab "Windows" %}}
### Если вы Windows пользователь

Если вы пользователь Windows, но лучше будет Если вы используете Windows: заголовки должны быть однородны.

Если вы пользователь Windows, но лучше будет Если вы используете Windows: заголовки должны быть однородны.
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На развернутом сервере следующие компоненты отвечают за отправку, получение и фильтрацию электронной почты:
- Postfix - SMTP-сервер;

Используй дефис, а не минус, согласно правилам русского языка. Они отличаются от правил английского языка.

Используй дефис, а не минус, согласно правилам русского языка. Они отличаются от правил английского языка.
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Also, you should use "ё" in russian texts.

Also, you should use "ё" in russian texts.
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